Talk:Heisenburp

Copyediting the Examples section?

The Examples section was added by EV in 2018. Today I noticed several problems with these demonstrations, and it seems to be in need of in-depth copyediting. Here are some questions:

About the images - Do we need these two blurred images with aged (they remind me of Lifeline diagrams), custom (and thus inofficial) style? Isn't the LifeViewer display with commands enough?
About the examples - Where are they first discovered? Where are they used in practice? Since there are actually two Heisenburp reactions, is it better to separate them? Or am I missing any actual application of the tandem reaction? What are the other spaceships not involved in the Heisenburp doing?
About the text - Is it necessary to describe the mechanism by generations in such a detailed way? Isn't the information about when and where a ship eats half of a traffic light irrelevant?

Wait for other's thoughts. GUYTU6J (talk) 05:00, 2 June 2020 (UTC)